OK, so that's 10.1 litres per mm of water height in display - and with a safety margin of 5% that becomes 10.6 litres per millimetre of water height. Using this info, you would thus need 1.8mm of sump "free bore" for every 1.0mm of water overflow height in the display tank, excluding water volume in skimmer, pipes and filters (if any...).
In my opinion you don't want (or need...) the very last baffle between the DSB and pump chamber - the one where the water is forced to flow underneath the baffle - as it just wastes space without contributing anything positive. I would rather increase the return pump chamber by that 100mm, and just use the single "overflow" baffle.
I would further suggest that when you build the sump, you initially leave out all the baffles (but install the skimmer and whatever filters you plan to use...), and hook it up "live" to the display tank. You can then start with a safe sump water level (say 100mm below the top) and measure the actual water level increase when all the power is switched off. This will make it much easier to accurately design the optimum water level in the sump, which will be controlled by the top level of that last baffle between the DSB and the pump chamber (I think you would be able to increase it quite a bit higher than shown in your drawings). Remember that the water level in the pump chamber is a compromise between the maximum safe "water-return-after-power-failure" level and the minimum "days-before-pump-chamber-runs-dry-when-you're-away-and-the-auto-top-up fails" level. Personally, I would try to maximise the latter, but still keep a safe maximum level to prevent flooding.
Hennie