The design looks good. May I suggest, though, that you increase the size of the return-pump chamber. In a set-up such as yours, the only place where the water level will drop due to evaporation will be in the return-pump chamber. With such a small volume (guessing 6-8 litres above the pump ???), the drop in water level will be very rapid, and will cause the return pump to run dry after only a few hours if the auto top-up does not work for whatever reason. I prefer to have a "reserve capacity" of at least 48 hours before the water level reaches the return pump.
Hennie